notkz_aztec_countjumps

I'm going to assume that it's your first map mindeekv. It's fine for a first map, although even this basic idea could be improved.

Try making the units signs func_illusionary with render mode: solid
Try different textures that haven't been used over and over, or in a default map the same way.
Try something new.

You got the basic idea of mapping down with the sky, the units, the water, etc. but you need to practice a lot more. I wouldn't recommend posting your first maps here because you'll get a lot of flaming, even if you are just trying to share your newest project that you're proud of.

all mappers was noobs in the beginning and didnt know wnything about units... dont be so harch against him :/