kzra_cavedale

oO3ddYOo04/10/2008 14:33

Status: Denied

Reason:

- U made a very nice Bhop Part but the outside part looks to amateurish and old.

- Wallbugs

Suggestions:

- Make better Textures for the Outside Part

- Wallbugs in the Bhop Stage and on the corners of the Outside Part:

http://tinnet.net/imghost/files/wallbug1.jpg
http://tinnet.net/imghost/files/kzra_cavedale0002.JPG

- If u go there u fall into the Worldspawn: http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=unbenanntpa2.jpg

- The 240 at the end is a little to strange i think 235 is enough :)

- The Part with the Breakables: make all breakable or make some fragile/rotten.

- Shortcut & Bugs:
http://sjs-webspace.extra.hu/stuff/kzra_cavedale0002.JPG <- small
http://tinnet.net/imghost/files/kzra_cavedale0000.JPG <- maybe possible?
http://tinnet.net/imghost/files/kzra_cavedale0004.JPG
http://sjs-webspace.extra.hu/stuff/kzra_cavedale0001.JPG
http://sjs-webspace.extra.hu/stuff/kzra_cavedale0003.JPG

NOTE
Make a changelog when/if you resubmit so we can easier see what you have changed and make the process go faster. Thank you.

mH [KZRA]04/10/2008 18:25(edited 04/10/2008 18:29)

Ok thx for the feedback, Im gonna try fix all the wallbugs and errors, i guess i can change the textures on the outside and make it alittle nicer.
But i disagree with
"- The Part with the Breakables: make all breakable or make some fragile/rotten."
Because i made that so you have to duck jump thru the solid ones, and on public servers the breakables will automaticlly dissapear, so if i make them all func_breakable they will all dissapear and wont look nice. But if thats what i have to do to get this map officiall, i will do it!

Thanks! /mH

mH [KZRA]04/10/2008 18:28

Ohh, and another thing. You said that the outside part looks to amateurish and old.
Does that mean that i have to delete the whole outside part and build something else? Or that i should change it pretty much??
Thx in advance!

/mH

sj04/10/2008 18:43

make the ones that are breakable look rotten/fragile or replace the other non breakable with some stronger material else this is very unrealistic that some break and some not

mH [KZRA]04/10/2008 18:51

ohh okay.. thanks for fast answer.
And about the outside part ?

oO3ddYOo04/10/2008 19:06

Use another Textures and make better Details for the atmosphere ;)

mH [KZRA]05/10/2008 00:56(edited 05/10/2008 00:57)

okok. i'll do my best and resubmit ;)