kzro_dahnajourney

Status: Denied

Reason:

- Fps

- Textures

Suggestions:

- The small green strips on the wall doesnt fit.

- If u go in the secret Room u cant get out again.

- Some later parts are to easy compared to the beginning.

- Dont use func_water cut it destroyes the fps. (70-80 fps)

- Shortcuts (just showing)

http://pici.se/pictures/cpxTPAJvh.jpg
http://pici.se/pictures/hjNnjgPJl.jpg


U have a good chance to get Custom if u fix the mentioned suggestions.


NOTE
Make a changelog when/if you resubmit so we can easier see what you have changed and make the process go faster. Thank you.