bhop_bleu

23/03/2009 21:26
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radon mapper Tournament #323/03/2009 21:26(edited 23/03/2009 21:31)

Status: Accepted

Release:

- next map release

Other:

- http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/bleu/bhop_bleu0002.jpg : teleport missing here.

- http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/bleu/bhop_bleu0001.jpg : lightbug.

- the name bhop_ is a very strange choice, you should choose something else.

- http://demolite.climbers-germany.de/mapcheck/bhop_bleu/minimap_entitys.jpg : minimap failure, entities can be seen through sky.

- http://demolite.climbers-germany.de/mapcheck/bhop_bleu/credits_hardread.jpg: hard to read.

- http://demolite.climbers-germany.de/mapcheck/bhop_bleu/final_lightbug1.jpg : small lightbugs. (optional)

- Optional:
Units for the longjumps
Left Strafe block, making the right block longer so that it is possible for boths strafers left/right

- http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/bleu1.bmp : texture doesnt treat as one.
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/bleu2.bmp : lightbug in the vent.
optional:
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/bleu3.bmp : theres A LOT of lamps in the ceiling there. would look better if he deleted a few.

- next time you make a map, be sure to come up with your own idea, its clearly ripped from de_blue :) its okay if its only a custom map.

- your map is also VERY SHORT, would be better if u made it longer.

- * http://i39.tinypic.com/2dbv7ls.jpg – lightbug in the corner
* http://i40.tinypic.com/2wgvtdd.jpg | http://i44.tinypic.com/2eewkn4.jpg[/IMG] | http://i42.tinypic.com/ann879.jpg | http://i40.tinypic.com/avkiyo.jpg | http://i39.tinypic.com/24npmpt.jpg | http://i42.tinypic.com/1zbupl3.jpg | http://i39.tinypic.com/ng7ibt.jpg | http://i43.tinypic.com/2d0yryg.jpg | http://i41.tinypic.com/2rmwriw.jpg | http://i44.tinypic.com/2z3qpvt.jpg – lightbugs
* http://i40.tinypic.com/2rh43nc.jpg | http://i42.tinypic.com/2ryopxu.jpg | http://i44.tinypic.com/2l9il4m.jpg | http://i39.tinypic.com/52n9jq.jpg – invisible texture
* http://i41.tinypic.com/2mqnwnq.jpg – water bug
* http://i39.tinypic.com/2wri1c8.jpg – null bug
* http://i42.tinypic.com/30ueiya.jpg – black bug
* http://i42.tinypic.com/2j15qw5.jpg | http://i41.tinypic.com/2hqwg40.jpg – texture bug
* http://i40.tinypic.com/124a14y.jpg – the texture is scaled to much in this vent.

- Warning: Unable to open 1matrix.wad for transfer
Warning: Unable to open de_struction.wad for transfer
Warning: Unable to open godspeed_ujo_corruo_holodeck.wad for transfer
Warning: Unable to open paranoia.wad for transfer
Warning: Unable to open poke646.wad for transfer
Warning: Unable to open tombtexts.wad for transfer
Error: server failed to transmit file '1matrix.wad'
Error: server failed to transmit file 'de_struction.wad'
Error: server failed to transmit file 'godspeed_ujo_corruo_holodeck.wad'
Error: server failed to transmit file 'paranoia.wad'
Error: server failed to transmit file 'poke646.wad'
Error: server failed to transmit file 'tombtexts.wad'

- there is only 20 spawn points, add 12 more.

- Images:
* Two unbalanced jumps (harder than mini-map challenge).
* Three unbalanced jumps (really hard to do them after ducked bhop).
* Light-bug in mini-map.
* Some light-bugs in mini-map.
* This part looks empty (also you can get in with hook and find one more texture bug and there is a place there where you can get stuck like in kz_man_lost_island - will upload the demo).
+ Demo like I said.
* Much texture-bugs on every edge of the roof in mini-map.
* Missing shadow.
* You can get stuck there.
* Unbalanced jump (hard to jump through that block w/o getting teleported).
* Texture bug.
* Texture bug (the same only in another corner).
* Texture bug.
* Texture bug (on most of the lamps).
* Some more texture bugs.
* And one more texture bug.

- CONCLUSION:

there is a lot of bugs, but remember that you dont have to fix them all, fix the ones you think are the biggest. You DO need to make a new version for us before we can release the map!

Timmycakes mapper23/03/2009 21:35(edited 23/03/2009 21:37)

rofl thats a lot >< well at least its accepted :P ill get to work thx radon

ans ya i know its "ripped off".. i use quotes cuz i said in the preview section its BASED on it. ill put that in the thanks texture or in some other way. i know people would notice -.- i aint retarded. again, BASED on it, not ripped off

radon mapper Tournament #323/03/2009 21:48

yea im sorry for using that term :D and ofc, it doesnt look completely like it... only the last part :P

Timmycakes mapper23/03/2009 22:55

i dont understand what ur saying on the first problem..teleport missing here, im not sure i get what u mean

oO3ddYOo24/03/2009 08:37(edited 24/03/2009 08:50)

this stage is hard and a teleporter would be nice in this area: http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/bhop_bleu0002.jpg

Cause if u fail these bhops u are back to the start. Make a teleporter to this area and teleport us back to the save stone (circle)

i hope u know what i mean.

Timmycakes mapper24/03/2009 08:54

o ok that makes sense :p thx

Timmycakes mapper02/04/2009 00:21

mkay resubmitted

oO3ddYOo03/04/2009 02:44

changelog missing, reupload

Timmycakes mapper03/04/2009 04:09

lame...resubmitted.

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