an_grassbhop

Status: Denied

Reason:

- main reasons are:
your textures isnt scaled up, repeats itself too much.
theres a leak in the map, so its overbright everywhere + low fps
the jumps are very repitive.
theres no structures or anything. very empty
you used too few textures, and theres alot of places where you didnt apply them right.
You have flying jumps in the map. (can only be made if it fits with the theme)

- boring jumps. Some unrealistic Jumps (flying)
http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/an_grassbhop/an_grassbhop0005.jpg
http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/an_grassbhop/an_grassbhop0008.jpg
http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/an_grassbhop/an_grassbhop0009.jpg

First stage:
http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/an_grassbhop/an_grassbhop0007.jpg
http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/an_grassbhop/an_grassbhop0010.jpg
http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/an_grassbhop/an_grassbhop0011.jpg

http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/an_grassbhop/an_grassbhop0000.jpg
http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/an_grassbhop/an_grassbhop0001.jpg
http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/an_grassbhop/an_grassbhop0002.jpg
http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/an_grassbhop/an_grassbhop0004.jpg

2 Textures for stones?

look at the lights

Suggestions:

- practise your mapping before you sbmit your map. because its clear to us that this is one of your first maps.

Other:

http://xtreme-jumps.eu/e107_plugins/content/content.php?content.91 "things to avoid when making your kz map"