kzarg_cursedtemple

Status: Denied

Reason:

- not many textures used. the walls are very plain and big, some architecture would help alot. Your bhops are way too slow. 1 spawn point?

- bugs: (oO3ddYOo)
Bad teleport trigger
Wallbugs: i think yes something block me here
sc: http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/cursedtemple/kzarg_cursedtemple0001.jpg

- bugs: (omilo)
This

- bugs: (radon)
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/kzarg_cursedtemple0000.bmp : you can stand here.
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/kzarg_cursedtemple0001.bmp : unbalanced jump
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/kzarg_cursedtemple0002.bmp : too plain
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/kzarg_cursedtemple0003.bmp : unbalanced jump
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/kzarg_cursedtemple0004.bmp : small lightbug
why is this temple cursed btw ?

- bugs: (kzro`cyclopP)
* http://i40.tinypic.com/nqaf51.jpg – texture bug at every single corner
* http://i42.tinypic.com/xcjd5g.jpg – small lightbug
* http://i41.tinypic.com/20ud3dj.jpg – strange shadows (maybe because it’s cursed ? hahaha)
* http://i42.tinypic.com/6prvh5.jpg + http://i42.tinypic.com/29z8obr.jpg (another angle) – flowing column
* http://i43.tinypic.com/2dmic1y.jpg + http://i44.tinypic.com/vn2fwo.jpg (with flashlight) – big rock bug
* http://i39.tinypic.com/2dskeid.jpg – it needs a smoother transition (not only there)
* http://i41.tinypic.com/2wpth6g.jpg – bhop stones lightbug

- bugs: (puppetz)
The light from these lamps looks nice (maybe too dark), but where is it coming from? Nowhere, apparantly.
A few minor bugs:
Stretched texture
"null" bug, I guess this is cause the max viewable distance is set too low.
Wallbug + other bug

- bugs: (sj)
first of all this unbalanced jump
http://sjs-webspace.extra.hu/stuff/kzarg_cursedtemple0000.JPG

(if there is many bugs, you dont have to feel bad about it, every little thing can be mentioned, and u dont have to fix all of them. but it would be best :)

Suggestions:

- Add a flame or something to your "lights" where does the light come from?

- make a lip on your bhops, so they doesnt go into the ground.

Other:

Note: Make a changelog when/if you resubmit so we can easier see what you have changed and make the process go faster.

note: http://xtreme-jumps.eu/e107_plugins/content/content.php?content.91 "things to avoid when making your kz map"

The map is fun to jump and have potential. try to fix the bugs and resubmit :)