i need some tips, ideas and criticism!

nAku_U23/04/2009 17:29(edited 24/04/2009 15:07)

hi!

i just did some "intro" and now i want, u guys telling me what i can do. remove, add or modify.

update 24/04

there u go
YouTube
new http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CQtEa-FeNKc&fmt=22
old http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mh2Xhv5ks-k&fmt=22

DownLoad
new http://rapidshare.com/files/224975143/Untitled.rar.html
old http://www.speedyshare.com/541594431.html

new

Resolution: 1280x720
Codec: .mp4 [MainConcept AVC/AAC]
Lenght: 1.33min
Size: 112 mb
Fps: 29.97 (NTSC)

old
Resolution: 1280x720
Codec: .mp4 [MainConcept AVC/AAC]
Lenght: 5sec
Size: 5.2 mb
Fps: 29.97 (NTSC)

kunqui23/04/2009 19:09

I can't judge a 5 seconds movie.. sorry
but that sound remember me the Mortal Kombat huh

kzF`crack24/04/2009 07:27

The font is bored, remove the CS logo..

If you want go watch any movie of movie-nations, creative movies etc.. and see the logo of the begin in the movie, I think its can help you to make your own logo.

HF

k a f f e e24/04/2009 12:44

i always thought 90% of this kinda intros are uber random and unneccesary. it's way better if u include it into the real movieintro with a simple decent text

also dunno what u did in AE there, i could do that in 5min per Vegas :/

nAku_U24/04/2009 15:12

ok first one was crap! its not even seems like AAE thing!

but now i update it! i was lazy to using vegas!! :D

simpler26/04/2009 16:58

did you do it in vegas?