kzlv_evolutionhop

Status: Denied

Reason:

- the textures which variates in each room doesn't fit sometimes
- the jumps getting boring after a while, you need to rethink the placement of the jumps and making them a bit creative

-bugs: (radon)
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/evolutionhop1.bmp : lightbug
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/evolutionhop2.bmp : strange texture on top of crates
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/evolutionhop3.bmp : lightbug
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/evolutionhop4.bmp : very repitive bhops, boring
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/evolutionhop5.bmp : strange structure at the top there, looks really strange
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/evolutionhop6.bmp : u can see thru sky there
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/evolutionhop7.bmp : nothing wrong with the vertexing, but its like its the same that is repeated over and over, try to make it look different everywhere
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/evolutionhop8.bmp : lightbug
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/evolutionhop9.bmp : very plain and flat top
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/evolutionhop10.bmp : line underneath the illusionari
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/evolutionhop11.bmp : lightbug

-bugs: (oO3ddYOo)
http://files.xtreme-jumps.eu/oO3ddYOo/mapcheck/evolution/kzlv_evolutionhop0001.jpg : texture bug

-15 Spawns please make 32.

-bugs: (kzro`CyclopP)
* http://i39.tinypic.com/25tgcxf.jpg – bad architecture
* http://i43.tinypic.com/ejbzbp.jpg | http://i44.tinypic.com/282m81y.jpg | http://i42.tinypic.com/mskaid.jpg | http://i41.tinypic.com/e712y0.jpg – lightbugs
* http://i40.tinypic.com/2v30pwk.jpg (invisible texture on both sides) | http://i40.tinypic.com/5e8m1h.jpg (invisile texture straight ahead) – try to find other ways to block something, not by adding invisible texture.
* http://i42.tinypic.com/10ygdb4.jpg | http://i39.tinypic.com/25sosp2.jpg– texture bug

Suggestions:

- practise your mapping before you submit again. because it looked for us, that it is your first map.
- sticking to one theme instead of many themes.

Other:

Note: Make a changelog when/if you resubmit so we can easier see what you have changed and make the process go faster.