rvp_tundra-bhop
Status: Denied
Reason:
- The "Ice" u made in the map, is uber bright, looks really strange when you compare them to the rest of the map.
- you jumps is very unbalanced! suddenly there is a really hard bhop between alot of easy ones, it feels very strange.
- bugs: (radon)
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/rvp_tundra-bhop0001.bmp : the ice texture repeats too much
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/rvp_tundra-bhop0002.bmp : the ice is way too bright for the dark room.
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/rvp_tundra-bhop0003.bmp : the fade from the roof suddenly stops, look bad.
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/rvp_tundra-bhop0004.bmp : more uberbright-ice
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/rvp_tundra-bhop0005.bmp : the jumps are also to bright for the room there.
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/rvp_tundra-bhop0006.bmp : same
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/rvp_tundra-bhop0007.bmp : the jumps are more and less transperant, depends where u stand.
http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/rvp_tundra-bhop0008.bmp : looks really strange that its so thin there. unrealistic
Suggestions:
- http://www.rad0n.dk/mapcheck/rvp_tundra-bhop0000.bmp : this room is very empty and kinda useless. maybe add the start button in there.
- - Fixing the models
Warning: Unable to open models/models/ac_maps_models/tree_noleaves.mdl for transfer
Warning: Unable to open models/models/ac_maps_models/skla_tree01.mdl for transfer
Error: server failed to transmit file 'models/models/ac_maps_models/tree_noleaves.mdl'
Error: server failed to transmit file 'models/models/ac_maps_models/skla_tree01.
- add different vertex some places, it looks the same all the way. (outside part)
- in #mappers you can get help about mapping and get feedback.
Other:
The map was almost accepted, You should fix the mentioned bugs and suggestions, it will almost 100% get accepted if you fix it. you did a great job on the map.
Note: Make a changelog when/if you resubmit so we can easier see what you have changed and make the process go faster.
Would you mind updating your post? Because I can see that you've taken a few new screen shots.
the map is still under review and the results will be posted soon.
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