Lagsters 254 Longjump

lol good job, awesome !

- introcams overseen perspectives/angles
- introcams doesnt make much sense in this order (pre, jump,dude walkin in, see dude from behind)
- custom knifemodels always makes me vomit
- overglowed colours, its always good to see the blocknumber and have rather un-whored settings. there u got like one huge plasemaball on the wall or something
- cutstyle... not cool. like a new tact comes in and you show some blackscreen, iregulary start showing a rewind scene somewhere offbeat.. it just doesnt have a decent flow when i watch it
- those media intros/outros... if you need em in a lj clip to feel more professional, ok
- try to collect some ideas for the clip, be more creative and think about certain effects to do (not talking about some 3d shit with a ct crashing through the ceiling) try to get more style into it via graphical effects and add something like a concept. without it just seems like 1 of the 20 vids i have seen in this style :/


since that jump was edited already i guess you wanted to hear some suggestions torwards the editing and not in first place to present the lj. so i hope some of it might be useful for you :>

nice edit