I released my first jump movie [mini/beta]

PASHiON++ · 2010-08-17T20:06:00+00:00

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pv84Y3W98Qw\r\n\r\n\r\nI made all jumps and edited that movie in same day..\r\n\r\nI know, edit sucks, but i used only 35min for making this.\r\n\r\n\r\n

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17/08/2010 20:06

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PASHiON++17/08/2010 20:06

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pv84Y3W98Qw

I made all jumps and edited that movie in same day..

I know, edit sucks, but i used only 35min for making this.

[My english sucks.. ;DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD]

200617/08/2010 20:11(edited 17/08/2010 20:12)

a lot to improve. intro was bad and the ending was quite bad too (seems like there are no outro at all). remove hud and add some colors. some transitions would've been nice as well. didn't like the music either. jumps were decent, basic jumps. overall didn't really like it that much.

Grrr17/08/2010 21:00

gotta say that its good for a first movie, u should learn to do some effects also :P

VErzuZ17/08/2010 21:23

some demos are illegal because you use the /speed command

sPADERâ™ 17/08/2010 21:25

verzuz it doesnt mather in a trickjump movie ^__^
Your lj style remind me alot of mine back in the days! I like it, keep improving.

PASHiON++17/08/2010 22:04

Originally posted by fak sqk neb
a lot to improve. intro was bad and the ending was quite bad too (seems like there are no outro at all). remove hud and add some colors. some transitions would've been nice as well. didn't like the music either. jumps were decent, basic jumps. overall didn't really like it that much.

As i said, this was fast edit..

I can make much better clips like this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=__WyX00_zv0

PASHiON++17/08/2010 22:05

Originally posted by VErzuZ
some demos are illegal because you use the /speed command

xj amx mod

beg1ner 1337Â¼17/08/2010 22:56

Originally posted by PASHiON++
Originally posted by fak sqk neb
a lot to improve. intro was bad and the ending was quite bad too (seems like there are no outro at all). remove hud and add some colors. some transitions would've been nice as well. didn't like the music either. jumps were decent, basic jumps. overall didn't really like it that much.

As i said, this was fast edit..

I can make much better clips like this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=__WyX00_zv0

don't think that copying videocopilot is much better but ok. and i would like the demo of the 252...

Torex-):-D

17/08/2010 23:02(edited 17/08/2010 23:03)

Originally posted by PASHiON++
Originally posted by VErzuZ
some demos are illegal because you use the /speed command

xj amx mod

it doesnt matter if its xj amx mod, cuz for recording its illegal to use /speed, buuut i dont see problem when ur just jumpin around,
ohh and about that ur trailer, well i cant rlly say that its better then this one, cuz u used everything from tutorials, well its not bad, but try to use them in other way or smth, trailer still needed much more work, but tutorials are for getting know to program and see what it can do, then u try to make other work using what u have learnt from tutorials,
well still gj for movie, it seems quite nice, but next time try to not use scout on jumps that can be accoplished with not just knife but even hevier weapons,
ok so, just keep up the good work, improve and all :] PLAY HARD, GO PRO

BAEVERN^17/08/2010 23:02

Originally posted by PASHiON++
I made all jumps and edited that movie in same day..

I know, edit sucks, but i used only 35min for making this.

Tell me. Why should we watch it if you havent spend any time and effort into this movie?
Hate all people that write such things...This made me not watch this movie! gl

PASHiON++18/08/2010 01:16

Originally posted by beg1ner 1337Â¼
Originally posted by PASHiON++
Originally posted by fak sqk neb
a lot to improve. intro was bad and the ending was quite bad too (seems like there are no outro at all). remove hud and add some colors. some transitions would've been nice as well. didn't like the music either. jumps were decent, basic jumps. overall didn't really like it that much.

As i said, this was fast edit..

http://www.sendspace.com/file/eqzsct
http://www.sendspace.com/file/eqzsct
http://www.sendspace.com/file/eqzsct

I can make much better clips like this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=__WyX00_zv0

don't think that copying videocopilot is much better but ok. and i would like the demo of the 252...

PASHiON++18/08/2010 01:39

Originally posted by BAEVERN^
Originally posted by PASHiON++
I made all jumps and edited that movie in same day..

I know, edit sucks, but i used only 35min for making this.

Tell me. Why should we watch it if you havent spend any time and effort into this movie?
Hate all people that write such things...This made me not watch this movie! gl

I hate you so much. :)

boom.dll18/08/2010 01:44

i should close your thread for that comment.
why did you put this up here?

zuveeh

18/08/2010 01:54(edited 18/08/2010 01:54)

you should really learn how to handle criticism

chip18/08/2010 14:55

How the fuck can you hate baevern, thats impossible.
The only hard jump would be 252, wich I think was cheated. And as many people said, remove hud, try doing some transitions etc.

k a f f e e18/08/2010 15:28

haha i love this, posting something srsly bad and if some advice besides shows up you go like "oh fuck off, i hate you" ect. :'D dont expect everyone to lick your ass for such a vid

anyways, jumps were rly sucky besides the 252. i got no idea why you are able to do 254stats but rather keep doing trickjumps that require like 240-strafes. why dont you record something half way decent, it should be np lol

and about the edit, that trailer was even worse, just remove the hud and keep it basic. get rid of the tutorialstuff and you will process by time.

ps: baevern word

WeMeRA18/08/2010 18:19

Demo on his 252 : sendspace.com/file/eqzsct

Please any demo admin check it?

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