Fantasm presents: The Counter-Strike Movement

this post is here just for comments and tips and advice this is only a rough draft

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bV3VNivpkDs

"The Counter-Strike Movement Show" what?

Really nice goretex.. I told you some days ago that you needed patience and here is the result. A brillant work needs patiente. Congratulation.

some interesting maps .. like 007 goldeneye of n64 =D
idk about the tricks cuz u didt on a lot of unknow maps but the music was really good , the camera moviments dndt look natural to me and you could add some colours modifications idk , i enjoyed watch

word ok well not much feedback but i guess i'll see what i can do, thanks guys. remember everyone this is just a test im still trying to learn about movie making, if you have any real actual movie making tips and suggestions like i said leave them peace

I prefer great jumps over any type of edit, which this movie didn't have. A lot of random maps and when it was a map I recognized the jump was old and easy. And what about 2:29? You fail that last jump, right? Sure looks like it at least!

I can't really give you any moviemaking tips since I'm not a moviemaker myself. But some sweet colours is always appreciated and I don't like seeing jumps only from a third person view, which you used too much of overall imo. Show every jump ineye and make campaths on some of them, instead of vice versa as it always was now.

This simple style of editing can really work though, but then the jumps need to be amazing.

This was not my cup of tea, keep on practising though.