flex | Persistence

Started by CamelCloudrecord holder
18/01/2011 17:12
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CamelCloudrecord holder18/01/2011 17:12(edited 18/01/2011 18:38)

Hello,

my new movie with flex is finally done, I hope you all enjoy it, and leave constructive comments below.

YouTube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZUJ3AM-1TY
SendSpace: http://www.sendspace.com/file/8ihqjo
Own3d.tv: http://www.own3d.tv/video/56114/flex_-_Persistence

(PLEASE, download instead of YouTube!)[/b]

Leave a comment here or on YouTube to feel our work appreciated.

Charly.0s18/01/2011 17:25(edited 18/01/2011 18:13)

here is my opinion, as a "constructive" comment I hope you'll understand

I didn't like many litle things in your clip such as the blur lense you used (which was too large/blured imo) and the effect you used at 1:22 and 1:32.
Your litle spray fail at 1:35 was rly fun btw =)
I think you could use a stronger color correction there ; I didn't like the song

to be frank when I look at a movie, since I'm a beginner in the kreedz world I can't say that the tricks are nice or not, but they look nice.

The overall was n1 cause of the shortly clip, a longer one with this style would be annoying imo.

(Please note that's just my opinion and I like many other clips from you)

CamelCloudrecord holder18/01/2011 17:27

Thank you a lot. I tried to solve the spray fail with mp_decals 0 last night, but it didn't work, haha.

Thanks again for the reply :)

actepukc^18/01/2011 17:28

Camel good work ;) flex nice tj's ! nice edit.

NOEL18/01/2011 17:46

Tricks could be defined as a little random, but I liked them regardless. So first of all gj for that flex.

Editing wise it was brave of you to gamble a little with the style, tbh though I didn't really like it, and I'll tell you why.
First of all it's rendered with 60fps. I don't understand why you guys keep doing that, sure you can render one with 60fps and put that on sendspace etc. (aka for the DL version) - but please also render a 30fps one for youtube cause 60fps just makes it look like you captured with really low fps.

That being said, still-cams have to be placed really REALLY well in order to make them work, which was something I didn't feel like you quite achieved.
I did however like the standard-ish colors, they fitted very nicely to the first song which created a great mood.
Cutting is a matter of taste I guess, and in some places I felt like it was good, but in other places felt a little out of place / overdone.

Gj for the movie.

nikitich moviemaker18/01/2011 18:16

30 fps? are u kiddin me?

everything else was good.

jarski18/01/2011 18:29

Ok when the song changed it felt like the movie changed too. Didn't like that. Also the outro didn't fit imo. Tricks were kinda good and the atmosphere was decent. Gj for trying something new camel :)

CamelCloudrecord holder18/01/2011 18:39

Thanks everyone.

Added Own3d.tv link.

FLP18/01/2011 19:43

Some nice jumps but most were random.Don't know if this is only on youtube but in first person fps was really low.I think that 2 so diffrent songs didn't fit in ~2 minute movie.I expected more from this but you will improve with time.

Fence18/01/2011 20:55

u r kidding? wtf! :X didn't like it at all

Ggs`18/01/2011 21:53

good job flex. And wish you luck in next projects CamelCloud

nobody^18/01/2011 22:30(edited 18/01/2011 22:33)

I will start with the stuff I disliked:
1. I didn't like the little "skips" although they were in a perfect sync with the song. Probably u shouldn't put too many.
2. I didn't like the second song.

However, enjoyable trickjumps and still the edit was nice. I am sure your future movies will be better.
Overall: 6/10, good job both. ;)

FadeToBlack18/01/2011 22:51

I liked the part when the 2nd song started and the movie became more dynamic but the flashlight somehow gets your attention and you forget to watch the jump. Also the outro was a littbe bit fast. Editing and tj-s were nice.
Overall: 8/10

Nubz moviemaker18/01/2011 23:24

Dissapointed me big time..

S7R1K3R19/01/2011 00:19

me too,btw gj anyway both. I expected something better...

BLuex19/01/2011 03:25

Originally posted by Ggs`
good job flex. And wish you luck in next projects CamelCloud

anaLchy19/01/2011 12:17

Cool jumps, but dont render with 60 fps, cuz it laggs.
Overall i like it 7/10 :)

nobody^20/01/2011 15:45

Originally posted by S7R1K3R
me too,btw gj anyway both. I expected something better...

:D

evuly20/01/2011 18:36

I expected more to be honest. Quite random jumps, but still new for me so GJ. The colours were boring, and the switch of song was.. well it didn't fit. Feels like you can do alot better Camel!

5/10 :\

peavey21/01/2011 16:35

i didnt like it at all neither the jumps or the edit
shouldnt have wasted an epic song like auditorium on this one. gl in future

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