2 jumps [editing]

You said that the jumps aren't special or so yourself, so I won't make a comment regarding them. The edit was pretty good and I liked the song as well. There's just a few things that bothered me:
- The splitstreams (playermodels) were kinda transparent, just have a look at the campaths and you'll see what I'm talking about. It's pretty easy to fix, just play around with the chroma keyer settings or maybe the matte-colors in hlae.
- I know that many people like them, but I'm not a big fan of the black fading in the corners. They don't really do anything either so I can't see why they are there.
- I felt that those blue lightrays got a bit too much at the longjump-campath. Don't overuse those.
- 2 minor things was the 3D intro-text and the fps. The 3D didn't quite fit in too well but you still did a good work with it. And the fps were generally fine, but it seems like you almost used less on your 252 lj (not the campaths, just in-eye). Try to keep 300 as a minimum and you'll be all good.

I just pointed out the things you did wrong (in my opinion), but if looking at youtube this is your second clip and for a second clip this is actually really, really great. Keep making movies :)