Freedom by giu ( starring Sinz )

Started by giu
11/12/2011 17:43
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giu11/12/2011 17:43

hi guys ! after many fails and bugs , the clip abous Sinz is done !
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ImQ3I3VkPBU

zak133711/12/2011 18:26

gj

scmb11/12/2011 18:42

master giu ;p

goldaaaa11/12/2011 18:43

good job

Sinzhns11/12/2011 19:13

awesome

Welder11/12/2011 19:56(edited 11/12/2011 20:43)

After your six "unsucceful" renders I should write something better than "nice!".
Can´t really judge jumps because I am not intro trickjumping, all I can say is that they were nice to watch. "EZ or not, I don´t give a f***." So let´s see what you did there.

INTRO:

    visibility of "giu presents" is not really good

    0:02 - 0:05 - too bright for my taste but nothing horrible
    good font, nice sync ;)


MID:
    great transition at 0:15

    that 0:18 flash was not really necessary - feels random IMO

    nice stopmotion (or whatever it is called) thing at 0:22 but it lacks something but I don´t know what

    again great 0:23 transition

    0:28 - 0:37 - didn´t like colours, maybe too bright

    enjoyed milita part, good colours, welll synced "effect" to the song at 0:42, ground at 0:44 was a little bit too bright

    that green thing at 0:56 was strange, maybe different colour would help


OUTRO:
    20 seconds is maybe too much for minute and half long clip (I stopped counting at 1:24) but I think it was on purpose because of syncing it to the song

    subbed because of that cute heart ^^


To sum up:
Not revolutionary but still had great time watching it. GJ both!
+ song choice, sync, campaths, great transitions
- text visibility in intro, colours at some parts
8/10

PS: I am not a MvM-er so some of the things I´ve written could make no sense so have mercy for me.
PPS: I watched your movie many times and spent a lot of time writing this.
PPPS: I apologize for space required for this reply but I couldn´t figure out better form for "longer" review.

giu11/12/2011 21:52(edited 11/12/2011 21:52)

Originally posted by Welder
After your six "unsucceful" renders I should write something better than "nice!".
Can´t really judge jumps because I am not intro trickjumping, all I can say is that they were nice to watch. "EZ or not, I don´t give a f***." So let´s see what you did there.

INTRO:
    visibility of "giu presents" is not really good

    0:02 - 0:05 - too bright for my taste but nothing horrible
    good font, nice sync ;)


MID:
    great transition at 0:15

    that 0:18 flash was not really necessary - feels random IMO

    nice stopmotion (or whatever it is called) thing at 0:22 but it lacks something but I don´t know what

    again great 0:23 transition

    0:28 - 0:37 - didn´t like colours, maybe too bright

    enjoyed milita part, good colours, welll synced "effect" to the song at 0:42, ground at 0:44 was a little bit too bright

    that green thing at 0:56 was strange, maybe different colour would help


OUTRO:
    20 seconds is maybe too much for minute and half long clip (I stopped counting at 1:24) but I think it was on purpose because of syncing it to the song

    subbed because of that cute heart ^^


To sum up:
Not revolutionary but still had great time watching it. GJ both!
+ song choice, sync, campaths, great transitions
- text visibility in intro, colours at some parts
8/10

PS: I am not a MvM-er so some of the things I´ve written could make no sense so have mercy for me.
PPS: I watched your movie many times and spent a lot of time writing this.
PPPS: I apologize for space required for this reply but I couldn´t figure out better form for "longer" review.

that is the greatest review i received and i thank you very very much !

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