JUMPER 3

Started by Zjapaf
26/03/2014 11:51
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Zjapaf26/03/2014 11:51

Hi guys my new movie :)... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K9eO-Vxrrfg

znx26/03/2014 17:13

Wow, pretty nice. Would love to see more from you!

Liked edit, disliked jumps on unknown maps and that you had to remind the viewer like 3 times that it's jumper 3 down there lol

Cobrex mapper Tournament #226/03/2014 19:00(edited 26/03/2014 19:04)

JapaZ, I hope you'll see this as a motivational review:

You surely learned and improved alot, from simple things like text/font, to more "advanced" ones like 3d and effects. When I'm saying this, I mean you've learned where and how to put certain elements in your edit.

The intro was quite allright, simple, yet not boring. Something was wrong with the first campath, probably you stopped the mirv zooming and that was what caused the "weird" motion/movement. I really liked that text transition from "2" to "3" at 0:26. Though, the text was shaking too much abit for the specific part of the song.
The "drop" at 0:33 was well done, synced quite good in my oppinion. The only thing I didn't "like" were the brutal/massive 0:36 and 0:37-8 shaking campaths. The song didn't ask for that "massive-ness" at that point + never use exactly the same effect twice in a row in a matter of few seconds.
The transition at 0:44 was brilliant, well done! The campath at 0:54-5 was pointless in my oppinion ... random shit I've seen lately :D. The shooting effect at 1:00 ... uhhm, what to say. Nice idea, but it failed my expectations, because it wasn't done exactly right. Listen to the audio (song + effect) and notice how suddenly and "random" that came ... again, the song didn't have a massive beat that asked for that. 1:03 really nicely done !! You could have hold the black screen + song abit more there to create intensity, but it was awesome either way. 1:14, nice sync !! 1:21, again, nice campath and concept.
1:37 ... I didn't really expect that. It was well made, including the trickjump + flash effect + blur effect. It's actually the first time that I see someone in this scene fitting perfectly the audio effect + video sync ... I'm talking about 1:42 !! 1:55, too much flash/white !! It wasn't necessary. 2:03, editing fail, cuz of the blackscreen suddenly appearing.
The outro background looked good, but the motion was stupid. Get what I meaN?


JapaZ, you know that I've allways liked your clips. After seeing this one, I instantly loved it. You managed to revive the joy in me of watching kreedz movies. Thank you !!
(sorry if I seemed cocky in this review, it was not intentional)

Zjapaf27/03/2014 00:39(edited 27/03/2014 00:41)


Zjapaf27/03/2014 00:40

Man thanks for all you saying to me and all feedbacks , it rly motivates me, ty bro :)!

Wh1te BearD^^28/03/2014 00:39

I have to say this movie was fantastic, you nailed it this time with all these transition/campaths, and well done on the jumps m4kind Ma BOI. Keep it up~

JamBawa28/03/2014 08:56

amazing movie mate!

kalinskY28/03/2014 12:14

amazing framerate !!! could you share some rending settings ?
looks like x264 avisynth.
anyway,huge potential !!!

Creative28/03/2014 14:24

gr8 clip

WeMeRA28/03/2014 17:30

Dunno, seems like any other movie that's been done the past 3 years. There are ofcourse exceptions. This wasn't just that intresting.

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