(kz_??) j2s_??

Started by liKo mapper
25/03/2007 15:53
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liKo mapper25/03/2007 15:53

Well after a big break im working on new map.
So here are some ss`s:

1. Start
http://img411.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0000startgu0.jpg

2. First jumps
http://img451.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0001start1tj1.jpg

3. Some jumps from first part
http://img66.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0003firstst9.jpg

4. Teleport to second :D
http://img231.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0002teleportwy4.jpg

5. Second part
http://img231.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0004seconddk4.jpg

6. And some ss`s from third part - but this room isnt finished yet, need put in jump parts - more details and etc. (maybe some changes) :D
http://img472.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0006thirdek2.jpg
http://img340.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0007third2ux5.jpg
http://img58.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0009third4yl5.jpg

Well atm. have map 2 parts almost done (some cosmetic changes avalible:P) and working on third.
In plan i have two more parts, one big and one smaller with finish.

edit:
some new ss
-added some details to first part
http://img300.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectta0002ae3.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectta0003ps3.jpg

-added brick style texturing and new jumps to second part, i think now looks better than old one
http://img86.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectta0005cy4.jpg

edit:
-third part almost done (not complete added to func_wall)
http://img181.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectta0000ot0.jpg
http://img245.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectta0001vq0.jpg
http://img180.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectta0003up1.jpg

for me is that part good, but im afraid many people dont like.. .boxes/crates maps...

-working on fourth (still not adedd to func_wall)
http://img355.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectta0004sv3.jpg

-after fourth part will be one more part, but little
-still need many many work on this map, after last compiling i found many many bugs :D ehhh

So, if u look on this ss`s what do you mean ? :)


[ Edited ]

1337ard25/03/2007 16:26

looks ok to me, i like the toon theme type textures (to many t's :O)


keep up the good work

s0liD mapper25/03/2007 19:42

Liko me likes hehe but u should change the last parts =)

Volsfootball25/03/2007 20:32

Textures looks great, but the map kinda looks blockish, use some vertex manipulation on some jumps

DaMp mapper25/03/2007 21:42

sry don't like it :(

Phobos^KE26/03/2007 14:43

I like it ;) it could by named j2s_toonworld :D

dEMolite mapper26/03/2007 17:27

Phobos^KE stop stealing namens from other map.

like DaMp me doesn't like it.

Dalai mapper26/03/2007 17:58

hm, looks kinda blockish and boring..sorry to say so :/
Here're my advices:
(1 - http://img411.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0000startgu0.jpg ):
The barrels look to much the same: use different textures, rotate them a little and maybe put some lying arround on the floor flooding out some toxic :D

(2- http://img451.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0001start1tj1.jpg ):
again to much the same..zZZz - i like light-effects tho :D

(4- http://img231.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0002teleportwy4.jpg ):
Teleporting usually sucks imo.. it kinda shows u r not able to link main-areas (using hint brushes e.g.).. As you really wanna teleport people for some reason, make up a big teleporting machine or somehting..like in kzse_toonworld ;P

(5- http://img231.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0004seconddk4.jpg ):
Rocks :D .. I really like the pitch dark and the fading effects..

(6-):
I like this one too (especially textures)

(7- http://img340.imageshack.us/my.php?image=projectt0007third2ux5.jpg ):
far to blockish, and waht i really dont like is that boring entrance to the left... make a border or use some vertex manipulation.. what cave is that aligned and perfect?? ^^

(8- ):
Looks pretty cool 8-)



Hope u can use the critiques :D

im out,
[aTp] Dalai Lama



[ Edited Mon Mar 26 2007, 06:01PM ]

liKo mapper26/03/2007 18:55

Pfeeh fu :D

but okey, someone likes, some dislikes :D

and very thx dalai for very good critics and ideas

So i will make some changes asap and than repost ss`s:)
[ Edited Mon Mar 26 2007, 06:56PM ]

Dalai mapper26/03/2007 19:09

cool u can handle critics :)

kunqui27/03/2007 02:02

J2S_Toonworld??

Ahahahaha

Volsfootball27/03/2007 03:16

toonworld - ?????

AverageFreak27/03/2007 08:14

j2s_toonclimb
j2s_toon_journey

just some ideas :P

also, pretty nice looking, but in some parts looks a little boring :/

Phobos^KE27/03/2007 18:57

sry I did not knew that some map has name toonworld :( so sorry for copyring

liKo mapper13/04/2007 16:12

updateD ! :)

Dalai mapper13/04/2007 16:36

very nice now! Looks like great fun playing it - wanna play it .. NOW :DD

DRUNKEN MASTER13/04/2007 17:23

n1! i love this toon maps^^

s0liD mapper13/04/2007 18:26

me likes liko hehe gj brotha =o)

Volsfootball13/04/2007 22:32

neat new screens, love it.

Aly00714/04/2007 00:01

nice map :)

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