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My first LJ edit
Criticism is welcome
2014 demo
You could've used more effects, cuts and cams, song has nice kicks and claps that you could utilize and synchronize with. The jumpoff speeding up effect, although looking cool, felt unsynchronized. Movie wasn't all that bad, could use some improvements, but i like simplistic stuff anyways.
Oh, just wanted to point out how amazing the strafes on this jump are.
Nice! An idea for next lj clips: When you play the jump in super slowmo, then for every strafe you could show stats for that strafe's gain, sync... assuming that the demo had individual strafe stats, if not then nvm.
Reduce time of black frames to minimum or add some text message,more campaths ,effects ,cuts ,slow-speed parts and you will be good moviemaker. GJ
Thanks for the feedback guys, it is pretty useful!
The sync on the first ineye clip was a bit off and is easy to fix. An easy tip to make your clip better: when you fade there all your footage into black put campaths in between instead of just blackness. Also use 1.6 models please. (just disable HD models from options in HLAE)
Keep it up :-)
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