kz_senskz_toonblock
Status: Denied
Reason:
- Lot of texturebugs:
Some of them are not even connected to the wall:
http://home.arcor.de/thafak0r/senskz_toonblock0000.JPG
- Sometimes you have to jump THROUGH them, which is very weird and UNREALSITIC because they are func_illusionary:
http://home.arcor.de/thafak0r/senskz_toonblock0001.JPG
- Misaligned textures and ugly borders: http://home.arcor.de/thafak0r/senskz_toonblock0002.JPG
- Lighting mistakes: http://home.arcor.de/thafak0r/senskz_toonblock0003.JPG
http://home.arcor.de/thafak0r/senskz_toonblock0005.JPG
- Other bugs: http://home.arcor.de/thafak0r/senskz_toonblock0004.JPG
the first part should be shortened by 10 "blocks", it gets too boring. And the 2 parts after the change af textures could be shortened too. All jumps are easy except for one duckjump (http://static.pici.se/pictures/IphLmAzDb.jpg)
the outside part is WAY to bright for the theme, and the netting at the top looks really bad. i think the outside should have an orangish tint to it, it would add so much depth
- IMPORTANT > If you fall into the water with the shark, there is no way to get out :X, also a few texture bugs like (http://i13.tinypic.com/4vnlt1y.jpg) , (http://i1.tinypic.com/4xmummu.jpg), and (http://i19.tinypic.com/4yg2sus.jpg)
u cant go into the hp-booster without duck
Suggestions: The idea is good but u have too many texturebugs and lamps which dont touch the walls. make the lamps solid pls cuz it would be more real.
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