kz_straighthops

Its my very first map witch is almost done :D . I would like to know if its close to look like an official one or not .

The idea is that all bhop blocks goes straight to each other , no turns :) . If you cant get what I mean becouse of my bad english , just download beta version of the map and you will see what im talking about :) .

Here goes some pics ! :D
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/2402/59003306zx9.png
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/6417/23808642og8.png
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/2097/31921567xc4.png
http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/9885/57821037ay1.png

And also beta version of the map :)
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Oh and yes , I know what environment is empty . If jumps are fine I will start working with environment :) .

for that fps: i hope its ur pc, not the map txtures.

Looks real cool for a first :D

Im going to play this ;)

also: all the rooms from the screenshots looks to blocky without any details. the only one which is going to get out of the details is the black fade from the top, because of the darkness.

You should really do more details to the wall and not only a wide wall.
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So you wrote that it is your very first map. Please do not post your first 10 maps because they become very bad. But if you need help all other maps are helpful in irc: #mappers @ quakenet

Hint: don't take the critisem or feedbacks from other mappers personally otherwise it could end with you that you don't want to map forwards.

Where is link for map?