[kzarg]_swampyjungle [In Progress]
Hi guys!
Well i'm working in my first map.This is a bhop/kz map whit a swamp/jungle ambientation.
Here are some pics of the map. I hope you like it!
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii293/exterense/swamp1.jpg
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii293/exterense/swamp7.jpg
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii293/exterense/swamp6.jpg
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii293/exterense/swamp5.jpg
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii293/exterense/swamp4.jpg
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii293/exterense/swamp3.jpg
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii293/exterense/swamp2.jpg
I accept all kind of comment's , all is helpfull.
well, srry my english and i go to work on map again!..
Cya!
work on your brushwork it looks too plane clip some things and vertex more to make your map different
gJ :)
Reminds me of wanderer. It looks a bit empty, too. You should add more details and experiment with the lighting a bit, I think. It has potential for sure, good job so far :)
But looks interesting
Let me be an inhuman animal who can read minds and see the future. And I see that it's just one more uber-extreme map what I will totaly hate and put in my blacklist, cuz of the challenge level. Am I right? Sure I am... (OF WHAT YOU MAPPERS ARE THINKING!?)
todoCOCOpapucajeta the map
Interesting, i test it and is very dificult :P
Originally posted by Coco#ArgWell i'm working in my first map
Sorry but if it is true, you should work on it further without posting screenshots or without releasing it. Because if it is really your first map, it will be bad or ugly. To prevent critical comments (maybe) you to take it personally. So you should make the first 10maps for your own. To improve your mapping skills.
And also there are skilled mappers willing to help in quakenet at #mappers
So if you have questions above anything you can ask them too.
dEMolite is the pt
this, maybe THE_map
duckbhops NOOO!!1 please no!
GJ COCO!
Originally posted by dEMoliteOriginally posted by Coco#ArgWell i'm working in my first map
Sorry but if it is true, you should work on it further without posting screenshots or without releasing it. Because if it is really your first map, it will be bad or ugly. To prevent critical comments (maybe) you to take it personally. So you should make the first 10maps for your own. To improve your mapping skills.
And also there are skilled mappers willing to help in quakenet at #mappers
So if you have questions above anything you can ask them too.
You made like 50 maps and still your maps are ugly like shit
Still.... horrible.
Your rooms are kinda like blocks.
Originally posted by raverYou made like 50 maps and still your maps are ugly like shit
Ah yea go and finish communityblock....
Originally posted by raverOriginally posted by dEMoliteOriginally posted by Coco#ArgWell i'm working in my first map
Sorry but if it is true, you should work on it further without posting screenshots or without releasing it. Because if it is really your first map, it will be bad or ugly. To prevent critical comments (maybe) you to take it personally. So you should make the first 10maps for your own. To improve your mapping skills.
And also there are skilled mappers willing to help in quakenet at #mappers
So if you have questions above anything you can ask them too.
You made like 50 maps and still your maps are ugly like shit
why is raver still here?
As one of your first maps its probably based around good jumps, but if not, you really need to work on it more, or find a more original theme, because it really does look like kzlv_wanderer ;3
I like the map ...
but i don't understand, if Brian would be making this map, everybody would say AWESOME MAP .
Now, since this random guy is showing a map, everybody says UGLY MAP, WORK ON THE MAP.. ETC .
If fof_utopia was accepted, i think that anything can be accepted .. oh sorry, i forgot it, you have to be a pro jumper or a pro longjumper to make good maps or whatever .
I love jungle style maps :)
Yes, its really look like wanderer :)
so gj!^^
No swampy feeling only because of a fog all over the map. A swampy environment is for me extremely vertexed and very very green. Your map is square like hell and the color doesn't fit. Sorry, never post your first maps.
Who said his first map cant be good. It's down to how hard he works on it.
BLT youre totally wrong! Who cares who made the map? Fact is that this map is square, bad lighted, and using bad textures! No offence but you wont get it to be acceptd! Still this is your first map so its ok!
And about Utopia, it is not my fav map but it is mapped very well (except of the lightbugs, i mean the architecture). And another factor is that its a custom map....
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