How is my rap demo ?:P
01/01/2014 04:25(edited 13/01/2014 20:01)hey guys if you'd maybe like to review my rap demo here:
demo done , here song:
http://youtu.be/KmdefDku6HY
and telll me what you think , i will appreciate it !
good luck and happy new year !
That accent doesnt work on rap brother... Still kinda surprised about german folk speakin english:P
Originally posted by ViglioshiusThat accent doesnt work on rap brother... Still kinda surprised about german folk speakin english:P
ey, don't talk shit! hiphop from germany is beast
01/01/2014 17:24Meh everything works on rap , and i am not german , i am greek so figure out =)
01/01/2014 17:30I liked the lyrics, it was very well written tho I think you need to work more on your breathing and in your accent, the beat was pretty cool indeed and also your flow wasn't bad :P Keep going dude!
01/01/2014 17:55Thanks zytH , appreciate your review , and yes i need to train more on my voice , piece of cake =) time will fix it.
01/01/2014 20:23not bad, but you can do better :)
01/01/2014 22:44I need lyrics!
02/01/2014 10:44thanks D@NG3R ^^ i will improve.
sitka i will post lyrics in few days with new demo :P
Sick beat, good flow, bad accent.
Work on it, it's not bad stuff this!
02/01/2014 15:41thanks Scary i am doing my best to get the accent better :)
03/01/2014 05:15(edited 09/01/2014 00:05)new demo recorded :D
http://www.sendspace.com/file/0swf1b
thanks for ur reviews practise is the best.
09/01/2014 00:02today's latest demo :D
http://www.sendspace.com/file/0swf1b
Everythings good dude...you really like 2pac dont you? This songs reminds me of http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nay31hvEvrY
11/01/2014 20:32hey amiggo , yeah i love 2pac and ofcourse the idea came from that song ;p
euxaristw file gia ta kala logia sou :)
song will be released on youtube at monday mixed and mastered :)
If you love Tupac.. Then I love your music:D
It's painfully average. Your voice simply doesn't fit for rap.
The 'beat' is a 4 second loop without a bassline.
You have no personality to be relevant on any scale.
Either take time to better yourself or quit now. No point "releasing" anything right now
drink a lot of alchohol and ur voice is going to get better :D:D jk
I assume that "your voice doesn't fit to rap" because of the bad microphone you got, studio version would sound a lot different. It just doesn't sound like a real recording yet ;D
And ofcourse, like everyone said, accent.. Keep listening to 2pac and analyze how he says things and pronounces them.
Just remember not to rap like i.e. 2 chainz. His rap is crap. Keep yourself to good and meaningful lyrics :)
2pac sucks
Go listen to real hip-hop
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=stgrSjynPKs
13/01/2014 00:14Originally posted by ViglioshiusIf you love Tupac.. Then I love your music:D
2Pac forever dude , remember that =)
Originally posted by botikIt's painfully average. Your voice simply doesn't fit for rap.
The 'beat' is a 4 second loop without a bassline.
You have no personality to be relevant on any scale.
Either take time to better yourself or quit now. No point "releasing" anything right now
Hey dude , seems like your the first hater i've got for my record , first of all the beat is fine
second "Your voice simply doesn't fit for rap" you can telll that to your self mate , any voice can fit to rap you just need to practise on it , and if you think i have no personality then you have no idea
what rap is about , telling me to quit like i am going to believe you or listen to you its what inspires me matey , thanks for your great words =)
Originally posted by laachuxdrink a lot of alchohol and ur voice is going to get better :D:D jk
I assume that "your voice doesn't fit to rap" because of the bad microphone you got, studio version would sound a lot different. It just doesn't sound like a real recording yet ;D
And ofcourse, like everyone said, accent.. Keep listening to 2pac and analyze how he says things and pronounces them.
Just remember not to rap like i.e. 2 chainz. His rap is crap. Keep yourself to good and meaningful lyrics :)
Relax matey , i dont have studio ofcourse and i am not recording since years thats just a start
accent will get itself better by the time be patient if you want to hear some changes .
Originally posted by botik2pac sucks
Go listen to real hip-hop
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=stgrSjynPKs
That's where you made my laugh , sorry but i will not be discussing anymore anything you say here
since i know your character already :)
Peace.
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