How is my rap demo ?:P
Originally posted by KarLiRelax matey , i dont have studio ofcourse and i am not recording since years thats just a start
accent will get itself better by the time be patient if you want to hear some changes .
Actually I was saying that more to clear it to others. It's not like your voice doesn't fit to rap, you just need better quality setup and you'll be ready to go, ofcourse not mentioning that rap more or less should become your life if you want to succeed. The long hours of training, but still, I kind of liked your performance.
It was meant more like that.
13/01/2014 02:22Let me tell you something brothers , i believe that most of you
are not americans/english, and ii think thats the reason of thinking the difference on the accent and the way i am pronouncing my words ...
as i said its not just about how i am rapping / my voice etc ,
its also about with what equipement i am using to do that aswell . Well tomorrow i will release that song mixed/mastered by a great friend on youtube , the track its specially for some contest ,see you then :)
Imo rapping in your mother language is better bro...greek/german w/e you are speaking...dont try to do stuff in english. Thats why you have bad criticize.
13/01/2014 20:00I am not trying amiGGo , i am doing it and i will keep doing it =)
here is the song mixed and mastered , have fun.
http://youtu.be/KmdefDku6HY
OH it was you hahahaha, amateur
keep going and keep having fun
14/01/2014 12:58Just wondering how can one write rap texts if he barely speaks English.
Originally posted by ShoCkJust wondering how can one write rap texts if he barely speaks English.
Gugl translate? But it seems that he doesn't speak English that bad. :ppp
14/01/2014 16:40Originally posted by laachuxOriginally posted by ShoCkJust wondering how can one write rap texts if he barely speaks English.
Gugl translate? But it seems that he doesn't speak English that bad. :ppp
It's understandable but imo not enough for someone who writes rap texts. Just wondering how he does it since he has mistakes in his posts :)
he obviously worked much more on his rap lyrics than on his posts on a gaming forums. + lyrics are pretty basic (no offence, i think it can be good too when its straightforward)
anyway, i thought it was okay. not really my jam tho but as long as you keep having fun in what you're doing, thats all that matters.
14/01/2014 17:25(edited 14/01/2014 17:26)Originally posted by PiilsnErkeep going and keep having fun
i will =)
Originally posted by ShoCkJust wondering how can one write rap texts if he barely speaks English.
I Barely speak english ?:P when you really need to do something cool
you will do whatever it takes to make it look nice.
and if you think that my english are bad because i write on other sections like a "troll" or
whatever you think then you are wrong , i dont take much time writing perfect sentences on forums
i just write something that you can atleast understand.
Originally posted by laachuxOriginally posted by ShoCkJust wondering how can one write rap texts if he barely speaks English.
Gugl translate? But it seems that he doesn't speak English that bad. :ppp
Nah i dont use google translate for such a stuff ... the only thing you need to use its
rhyming dictionary =)
Originally posted by ShoCkOriginally posted by laachuxOriginally posted by ShoCkJust wondering how can one write rap texts if he barely speaks English.
Gugl translate? But it seems that he doesn't speak English that bad. :ppp
It's understandable but imo not enough for someone who writes rap texts. Just wondering how he does it since he has mistakes in his posts :)
haha when i post stuff in forum i do it quick and leave them , i just focus more on my lyrics
and write / rewrite untill i get my text as good as possible.
Originally posted by finzErhe obviously worked much more on his rap lyrics than on his posts on a gaming forums. + lyrics are pretty basic (no offence, i think it can be good too when its straightforward)
anyway, i thought it was okay. not really my jam tho but as long as you keep having fun in what you're doing, thats all that matters.
yeah thats normal not just for me but for everyone else who writes lyrics ...
thanks for your comments.
continue developing ur skills man
I was being serious though. This is just some middle-of-the-road 'inspirational' bullshit with ABAB rhyme scheme throughout the whole fucking thing.
You don't even put yourself into this. This is middle school poetry.
23/01/2014 01:41I didn't read all the responses but just keep doing it man, post some rap in german, I really like german rap. Regardless get at me if you want help or need beats, little known fact I've been producing for years and dabbled in rap a little bit, released a few verses/on shelves in Australia. I'll post a few links;
In terms of rap, this was released a little while ago, I got last verse on this track @2:23; http://vanguardmusic.bandcamp.com/track/byo-ruckus
But as I said, I pretty much only produce now, most notably last year got my first national/label release;
I produced the track 'Two Steps Back' for Dr. Flea
iTunes link; https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/keep-on-moving/id681405704
Or you can hear it here free; http://flea.bandcamp.com/track/two-steps-back
Finally, a little more production; https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lUYAKU71hgc&feature=player_detailpage#t=128
I haven't done much as of recent, for those who know anything about UK rap, I have a beat on a new P110 coming out in the next week or two so that should be dope.
As I said, PM me if you want to chat more, want help or need beats, I got a tonne of produce sitting that I haven't sent out to MC's.
Keep at it bruV~
Great bro, i think your voice whit fit good for reggae) Ofc some practise in flow, keep it up!
23/01/2014 17:22(edited 23/01/2014 17:27)It is okay but your accent sounds weird in a bad way unfortunately. I don't think there's anything you could do about it though - it's like italians or spanish people. They may live in England for years but that spanish accent will never disappear competely. I'd say stick to your language and keep improving.
23/01/2014 17:46Originally posted by botikI was being serious though. This is just some middle-of-the-road 'inspirational' bullshit with ABAB rhyme scheme throughout the whole fucking thing.
You don't even put yourself into this. This is middle school poetry.
hahah let me see you rap then , i wanna see your "HIGH SCHOOL POETRY" bullshit.
Originally posted by lagsterI didn't read all the responses but just keep doing it man, post some rap in german, I really like german rap. Regardless get at me if you want help or need beats, little known fact I've been producing for years and dabbled in rap a little bit, released a few verses/on shelves in Australia. I'll post a few links;
In terms of rap, this was released a little while ago, I got last verse on this track @2:23; http://vanguardmusic.bandcamp.com/track/byo-ruckus
But as I said, I pretty much only produce now, most notably last year got my first national/label release;
I produced the track 'Two Steps Back' for Dr. Flea
iTunes link; https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/keep-on-moving/id681405704
Or you can hear it here free; http://flea.bandcamp.com/track/two-steps-back
Finally, a little more production; https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lUYAKU71hgc&feature=player_detailpage#t=128
I haven't done much as of recent, for those who know anything about UK rap, I have a beat on a new P110 coming out in the next week or two so that should be dope.
As I said, PM me if you want to chat more, want help or need beats, I got a tonne of produce sitting that I haven't sent out to MC's.
Keep at it bruV~
thanks mate , i will PM you for sure !
Originally posted by random`Great bro, i think your voice whit fit good for reggae) Ofc some practise in flow, keep it up!
thanks man ;)
Originally posted by perd0It is okay but your accent sounds weird in a bad way unfortunately. I don't think there's anything you could do about it though - it's like italians or spanish people. They may live in England for years but that spanish accent will never disappear competely. I'd say stick to your language and keep improving.
I Think there is something to do about it , practise practise and improve .. it takes time so relax
i speak about 4 languages so dont you think its easy to manage them all perfectly.
but anyways thanks for your sugguestion.
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