Hitlooser 256

Started by ExpaNsion
24/08/2014 22:01
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ExpaNsion24/08/2014 22:01

Youtube: http://youtu.be/kbyMHwVO7Ng
Download: https://www.sendspace.com/file/pjskl0

iodine24/08/2014 22:11

Not bad, but wish it wasn't so flashy. (my poor eyes)

perd0 mapper24/08/2014 22:21

so basicaly in which part of the clip can i enjoy the jump itself?

PiilsnEr24/08/2014 22:46

Originally posted by perd0
so basicaly in which part of the clip can i enjoy the jump itself?


he obviously is a moviemaker and he wanted to showreel his skills and his moviemaking style. Not reupload it for you to enjoy a boring longjump block which is impossible to enjoy because it's 6-8 sharp turns on a monitor (Intelligence quotient probably low because he bash his head with a hammer, check next to his nick). This clip however was interesting with alot of cool FXs.

Ped0 (I see what you did there ''Pedr0')' - is a child porn director and he tells expansion electro to make it more visible with less FX so some parts will be more visible. You're a sick human being, I hate you and you're disgusting af 4real HATRED TOWARDS YOUR FAMILY AND EVERYONE YOU EVER MET

ExpaNsion24/08/2014 22:54

you're right iodine they are too sharp for myself, i mentioned that in the description.
APE your comment cheered me up for sure, thank you :D there are always a guy which "can't enjoy jump because of edit" ehrm, its obvious that i add effects

PiilsnEr25/08/2014 00:08

Originally posted by ExpaNsion
you're right iodine they are too sharp for myself, i mentioned that in the description.
APE your comment cheered me up for sure, thank you :D there are always a guy which "can't enjoy jump because of edit" ehrm, its obvious that i add effects


Just fuck off expansion I love you so just die good luck in your future moviemaking carreer cheets mate!

perd0 mapper25/08/2014 01:21(edited 25/08/2014 01:30)

bad internet connection, tripple post

perd0 mapper25/08/2014 01:24

i like the clip and effects i never said i don't lol. but u know if u dont let us see the jump itself properly it doesnt fucking matter whether you're editing new 254 jump or just some 100aa bullshit.

and you open your eyes first of all at my nickname, btw i didn't get that part about porn director is that supposed to make my day or something?!

perd0 mapper25/08/2014 01:27(edited 25/08/2014 01:29)

bad internet connection, tripple post

PiilsnEr25/08/2014 02:03

Stop being hostile what have I ever done to deserve this I maybe didnt't have the best grades in school or the prettiest girlfriend but I do not deserve this from you perd0. I might have overreacted in my previous post and i'm ashamed spit on my marble grave Stones because what world have I stumbled upon.. I shred my last tears and hope ill be forgiven, sincerely PiilsnEr

fakan25/08/2014 02:45

Originally posted by perd0
i like the clip and effects i never said i don't lol. but u know if u dont let us see the jump itself properly it doesnt fucking matter whether you're editing new 254 jump or just some 100aa bullshit.

and you open your eyes first of all at my nickname, btw i didn't get that part about porn director is that supposed to make my day or something?!

you are just feeding such obvious troll

ExpaNsion25/08/2014 03:07

Originally posted by PiilsnEr
Stop being hostile what have I ever done to deserve this I maybe didnt't have the best grades in school or the prettiest girlfriend but I do not deserve this from you perd0. I might have overreacted in my previous post and i'm ashamed spit on my marble grave Stones because what world have I stumbled upon.. I shred my last tears and hope ill be forgiven, sincerely PiilsnEr

Man what do you smoke? Gimme that shit!

PiilsnEr25/08/2014 11:13

Expansion drugs is not the solution, be in the forest while gumpening. You will learn to meditate and observe nature and be high on mother earth while father dust releases his cum in your grey eyelids

musaka25/08/2014 14:18

Awful edit,can't see shit.

g-Lprecord holder Tournament #125/08/2014 15:31

crazy edit dude, that was impressive.

PiiiLsn3R stop feeding dem trolls eh

Cobrex mapper Tournament #225/08/2014 15:57

Hi expansion,

Hope I can express my oppinion about this edit without being verbally attacked by you, 'cuz of our "past". :)
I appreciate that you spent some time again editing for the scene ... as you've probably seen, there ain't nobody editing a masterpiece nowadays.
Honestly, I never liked your edits ... I don't say you suck! its just about style and how I see movies as a whole. You DO have skills and some sort of knowledge, but the way you use them is just weird, different. You always relied on positive comments(mostly from newbies) rather than negative ones (mostly from people that know something about moviemaking, or just general knowledge). You got to admit that you have your own style and that won't change, which is a good thing. Do what you love!
About the edit, I;m gonna point out some flaws I've noticed so far:
- the intro is over-flashed, which doesn't have to do with anything so far ... you could atleast use a slow "pulse"-like flash related to the song(voice or beat)
- I can't see whats written there: I see *xxxx* what?
- "Am I still alive" is barely visible while watching ... I couldn't capture it without pausing the video
- Why was "hitlooser" on the ground? Whats the story based on?
- He "died"/"fainted" with his pistol in his hand ... when he "woke up", he was holding a knife ... dunno man, I care about these small unnoticable things:)
- 0:12-13 nice effect on the knife there!
- 0:16 i personally don't like that "knife effect", but it sorta' mixed quite well in this edit
- 0:17 great effect on the ct model ... which I could do that too :)
- 0:25 quite random effect dont u think? but as this clip is full of "random", even some cool effects, I can say it mixed abit there
- 0:18 and 0:27 did you just use the same campath? don't you know the rule? :D :D
- 0:28 whats up with the black moving """border""" down there?

7/10 I would give it ... but I respect your effort & time you've put into and don't stop even tho the "will" of editing more faded long time ago
This is just my oppinion and I hope you can see that! It's a good edit, you sure have skills and knowledge, I just wanted to point out some things .. :)

PS: GREAT SONG (share)

PiilsnEr25/08/2014 17:24(edited 25/08/2014 17:40)

Originally posted by ShoCk
PiiiLsn3R stop feeding dem trolls eh


deleted cuz I didnt see shock were provoking me with a 3 instead of a E, yes i'm a assburger and suck a fuck shock

a bit too overedited for my taste, gj tho

propanelj record holder25/08/2014 18:07

The edit does exactly what it was supposed to, if you want to enjoy the jump itself you do it ingame.
But as usual the edit was great expansion, tho i still prefer cleaner edits :)

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