Hitlooser 256

Originally posted by Cobrex

Hi expansion,

Hope I can express my oppinion about this edit without being verbally attacked by you, 'cuz of our "past". :)
I appreciate that you spent some time again editing for the scene ... as you've probably seen, there ain't nobody editing a masterpiece nowadays.
Honestly, I never liked your edits ... I don't say you suck! its just about style and how I see movies as a whole. You DO have skills and some sort of knowledge, but the way you use them is just weird, different. You always relied on positive comments(mostly from newbies) rather than negative ones (mostly from people that know something about moviemaking, or just general knowledge). You got to admit that you have your own style and that won't change, which is a good thing. Do what you love!
About the edit, I;m gonna point out some flaws I've noticed so far:
- the intro is over-flashed, which doesn't have to do with anything so far ... you could atleast use a slow "pulse"-like flash related to the song(voice or beat)
- I can't see whats written there: I see *xxxx* what?
- "Am I still alive" is barely visible while watching ... I couldn't capture it without pausing the video
- Why was "hitlooser" on the ground? Whats the story based on?
- He "died"/"fainted" with his pistol in his hand ... when he "woke up", he was holding a knife ... dunno man, I care about these small unnoticable things:)
- 0:12-13 nice effect on the knife there!
- 0:16 i personally don't like that "knife effect", but it sorta' mixed quite well in this edit
- 0:17 great effect on the ct model ... which I could do that too :)
- 0:25 quite random effect dont u think? but as this clip is full of "random", even some cool effects, I can say it mixed abit there
- 0:18 and 0:27 did you just use the same campath? don't you know the rule? :D :D
- 0:28 whats up with the black moving """border""" down there?

7/10 I would give it ... but I respect your effort & time you've put into and don't stop even tho the "will" of editing more faded long time ago
This is just my oppinion and I hope you can see that! It's a good edit, you sure have skills and knowledge, I just wanted to point out some things .. :)

PS: GREAT SONG (share)

Hi Cobrex. what to say that im shocked, this may be my best comment ever and yes it is. and i never could imagine that it will be by you :D Im really happy by reading this, for your detailed opinion about almost all seconds, for honestly. this really motivates me to continue editing even i probably will be alone for now. thank you peope for this feedback i didnt expect, i appreciate negative comments as much as positive. This community isnt that dead as i thught it is, just dont leave this what you have built :)