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Started by ei-zmei mapper
18/03/2015 12:13
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Mathzz23/03/2015 11:14(edited 23/03/2015 11:16)

Definitely number 2, as it visually fills those empty spots we see on the first one and makes it look more busy with the added detail.
http://imgur.com/a/DwlE4#2 breathes more life into the room compared to this version http://imgur.com/a/lDr7k#2

KarLi mapper23/03/2015 16:56

i like the first one, its more colorful.
second one is nice too though

Commander_X23/03/2015 17:22

Definitely 2

ei-zmei mapper25/03/2015 12:41

Originally posted by Spider1
In the last picture I can see you have a barrel dropped down, just a simple idea I got is to make a little hole in the ground near that barrel and put some kind of slime going out of the barrel on the ground :)
Or water,u make it how you like if you want :D



http://imgur.com/a/DwlE4#4

perd0 mapper25/03/2015 17:16

Man the map looks damn good keep it up and make ithappen asap!!!! :p

Keo mapper25/03/2015 23:33

Originally posted by ei-zmei
Originally posted by Spider1
In the last picture I can see you have a barrel dropped down, just a simple idea I got is to make a little hole in the ground near that barrel and put some kind of slime going out of the barrel on the ground :)
Or water,u make it how you like if you want :D



http://imgur.com/a/DwlE4#4


what you made is a good effect, but how you made it is wrong. Don't use such pointy curves (i'd recommend NEVER; only use such pointy curves if the design asks for it), as it doesn't provide realism. Make the curves of the hole in the ground smoother and diverse in lentgh and angles....here's an example http://postimg.org/image/3kfmhblp7/. Also add some bits of the broken floor next to the hole or somewhere near.

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rawerecord holder Tournament #126/03/2015 01:36

Originally posted by byob
2 but with less white-ish lighting and more diversity. I'd use at least 1 more lighting colour, as it is a industrial facillity of sorts, lots of different kinds of lights could fit.

also, break the floor a little bit to add a realistic effect

Spider1 mapperlj record holder Tournament #326/03/2015 07:54

Nice you did my suggestion :D looks nice :)

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